Thanks for the feedback, and apologies for the delay in getting back to you.
What are your thoughts on the following?
I hear you that Conclave challenges shouldn’t automatically protect Citizenship. I would like to retain mention of the Conclave challenge being an option within the body of the Act though as this possibility isn’t immediately obvious. I’ve removed the automatic protection and have instead specified that the Conclave needs to issue an order to protect Citizenship for Citizenship to be protected.
Understanding that being a Citizenship Officer can be difficult, I am also strongly of the belief that these audits are only as difficult as the Auditor choses to make them, especially since the process to identify a Nation that is non-compliant can be largely automated. What I originally wrote are the same standards which I would expect myself to follow if I were in the Citizenship Office, so I can’t see where they would be particularly burdensome during an audit; since the only two people to respond in this topic have said they are though, I will keep that in mind.
I think the due diligence clause is important to keep as I couldn’t see where in the Citizenship Act or in the EPSA Act it was required that the Overseeing Officer was required to keep records of deployments on the forums; only that those records be kept for the Citizenship Office to review for enforcement of the clause. As a result, the single source of truth for deployment information is the Overseeing Officer. Maintaining an off-site Google Doc and then sending the link to an Auditor during an audit would be compliant, for example.
Because the Overseeing Officer is the single source of truth, and because each Overseeing Officer may have their own way of maintaining records, I think that it’s important to either include the due diligence clause, or to update Section III of the Citizenship Act or to update the relevant section of the EPSA Act (likely Section III) to specify a single source of truth beyond the Overseeing Officer; though I am now concerned that this too would be an additional burden on the Overseeing Officer.