[TREATY] Poem of The Greats (Thaecia & TEP)

Good day Magisterium,

I am presenting amended treaty between Thaecia and The East Pacific.

We added mention of legitimate governments, successors and coups. We also reworded cultural clause.

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POEM OF THE GREATS

Preamble:

At the island, known as Christie,
The awaited dawn appeared.
As the golden rays covered the land,
Two brothers, known as the Greats, met.

The older, who lived past a catastrophe,
The younger, who was still so young.
Far from sight, of the filthy world,
They came together,
Stretching their arms.
The songs of their sons,
They want to share.

From what they want to abandon,
The endless pain, loneliness and darkness,
And to protect the gold of their people,
They agree to create a bond.
Thus, a spell, together, they cast:
Calling Seraphim, the Angel of Diplomacy.

They look at one another,
They see a brother.
Bond, created together,
Shall be never forgotten!

And to memorize this event,
Seraphim looks from above,
Inking joyfully his papyrus,
Seraphim writes the poem,

Poem of the Greats.

Article 1: Recognition

  1. Both signatories shall hereby recognise the Government of Confederated East Pacific, as established by the Concordat, and the Government of Thaecia, as established by the Constitution of Thaecia, as the legitimate governments of the East Pacific and Thaecia, respectively.

  2. Both signatories hereby recognise any legal successors of signatory governments.

Article 2: Establishment of Relations

  1. Both signatories shall maintain in-game embassies with one another.

  2. Both signatories shall maintain a diplomatic exchange to the best of their ability, in which each signatory sends a diplomat to the other’s region.

Article 3: Mutual Cultural Exchange

  1. Each signatory shall encourage their citizenry to engage in the cultural events of the other signatory.  Cultural events include but are not limited to festivals, competitions, and game nights.

  2. Each signatory shall respect the other’s cultural values and items.

Article 4: Intelligence Sharing

  1. In the event that a signatory comes across intelligence that pertains to a threat to the other signatory’s regional security or to any act being undertaken by a party engaging in military hostilities with a signatory, said intelligence shall be shared between signatories.

  2. Intelligence shall be shared to the Viziers of the East Pacific or the President of Thaecia for the respective signatory.

  3. Both signatories shall agree to keep shared intelligence confidential unless doing so violates the domestic laws of each signatory, the terms of service for any regional service used by each signatory, or the terms of service of NationStates.

Article 5: Military Obligations

  1. Each signatory shall agree not to engage in military hostilities, subterfuge, or espionage against each others’ regions and legitimate governments.

  2. Each signatory shall agree to provide military aid in the event of an attack, coup, invasion or any other hostile military action against the other’s home region.

  3. Each signatory shall provide military aid for a legal transition of power between delegates, if requested.

Article 6: Amendments

  1. If either signatory wishes to terminate the treaty, negotiations shall initiate, lasting for a minimum of three days, in which the signatories discuss either amending or annulling this treaty

  2. Either signatory may request an amendment to be made to this treaty. Following such a request, both signatories shall discuss the amendment. Upon ratification by both signatories, an amendment shall be ratified and effect this treaty.

  3. Upon failed negotiations described in fist section of this article, the signatory willing to repeal this treaty, shall notify the other partner about final repeal.

  4. Both signatories shall not consider annulment of this treaty as an act of hostility or declaration of war upon the other signatory.

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Legitimacy and succession in governments is very important in treaties such as this, and the cultural article seems to be written well. I’m surprised it wasn’t like this in the first edition of the Treaty, but I am glad that this amendment has been submitted. I will be voting for.

No objections from me. Doesn’t seem like there are any glaring flaws within this treaty.

I support the amendments. One thing, though.

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  1. If either signatory wishes to terminate the treaty, negotiations shall initiate, lasting for a minimum of three days, in which the signatories discuss either amending or annulling this treaty[hr]
  2. A signatory may decide to annul this treaty at any time, excluding the circumstances listed in Section 1 of this Article. A signatory shall notify the other signatory of this decision. Upon such notice, the treaty shall be officially annulled one week from notification.

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To get this straight, the treaty shall be annulled  one week after a signatory notifies the other signatory. This notification can be submitted at any time, unless there are negotiations to terminate the treaty?

This doesn’t really make sense to me. >.< It mandates negotiations, but then two clauses says said negotiations aren’t mandatory. That’s contradictory, but I’m unsure if I’m missing something or not.

Not a fan of cultural exchange clauses, but I’m happy with the change as it stands.

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  1. Both signatories hereby recognise any legal successors of signatory regions.

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Should’ve caught it in the DM, but shouldn’t this be “governments”, not “regions”? Or “regions’ governments”?

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I support the amendments. One thing, though.

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  1. If either signatory wishes to terminate the treaty, negotiations shall initiate, lasting for a minimum of three days, in which the signatories discuss either amending or annulling this treaty
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  2. A signatory may decide to annul this treaty at any time, excluding the circumstances listed in Section 1 of this Article. A signatory shall notify the other signatory of this decision. Upon such notice, the treaty shall be officially annulled one week from notification.

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To get this straight, the treaty shall be annulled  one week after a signatory notifies the other signatory. This notification can be submitted at any time, unless there are negotiations to terminate the treaty?

This doesn’t really make sense to me. >.< It mandates negotiations, but then two clauses says said negotiations aren’t mandatory. That’s contradictory, but I’m unsure if I’m missing something or not.

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I thought that I had written something about that?  I could be wrong.  I will defer to Serge on that one

No particular objections.

I guess not objectionable to me

I’m waiting for an amendment that removes that poem.

Your proposals, except for Bach’s heresy, have been added to the treaty & Thaecia has accepted them.

Yee yee

I’m motioning this to vote.

Seconded