[Passed] Liberate The Communal Confederacy

[hr]Security Council Resolution #244: Liberate The Communal Confederacy
Proposed By: La Navasse[hr]

The Security Council,

Observing that The Communal Confederacy, a revolutionary leftist region, once had over forty nations in its youth;

Noting the region’s decline and inactivity, especially after the Founder, [nation]The FAJ Federation[/nation], ceased to exist;

Distraught at the current occupation by [region]KAISERREICH[/region], which has locked down the region;

Appalled by the high number of “Colonies”, or trophy regions, that the invading region possesses;

Highly Disturbed by the near certainty of regional destruction and a refound of The Communal Confederacy by KAISERREICH;

Believing that the region will not reach its fullest potential, which it had barely shown in its youth, without a SC Liberation;

Hereby Liberates The Communal Confederacy.

The inspiration for this proposal came from a post by Unibot regarding TCC and how it was being occupied by KASIERREICH: NationStates • View topic - [IDEAS] Ideas for SC Resolutions

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[hr]Liberate The Communal Confederacy
Proposed By: La Navasse[hr]

The Security Council,

Observing that The Communal Confederacy, a revolutionary leftist region, once had over forty nations in its youth;

Noting the region’s decline and inactivity, especially after the Founder, [nation]The FAJ Federation[/nation], ceased to exist;

Distraught at the current occupation by [region]KAISERREICH[/region], which has locked down the region;

Appalled by the high number of “Colonies”, or trophy regions, that the invading region possesses;

Highly Disturbed by the near certainty of regional destruction and a refound of The Communal Confederacy by KAISERREICH;

Believing that the region will not reach its fullest potential, which it had barely shown in its youth, without a SC Liberation;

Hereby Liberates The Communal Confederacy.

The inspiration for this proposal came from a post by Unibot regarding TCC and how it was being occupied by KASIERREICH: NationStates • View topic - [IDEAS] Ideas for SC Resolutions

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I like it, mate. The only thing I can think of immediately are a few minor stylistic changes that I would make, because I’m not very experienced in Security Council resolutions.

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Highly Disturbed by the near certainty of regional destruction and a refound of The Communal Confederacy by KAISERREICH;

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Just a few ideas that might help the aesthetics a bit:

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Disturbed by the near-certainty of regional destruction and the reestablishment of The Communal Confederacy by KAISERREICH.

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Otherwise, I dig it. Offers in-depth context, but does so in a concise, easy-to-read manner.

I didn’t notice that the region was simply never detagged.

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I didn’t notice that the region was simply never detagged.

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Due to the uncertainty regarding whether Marman’s actually a native, I’ve put this under reconsideration for further research.