OK. I’m approaching this as a divide and conquer scenario. Let’s attack the first section, them move onto the others.
I think that we all can agree that there needs to be simplification in the laws and make it so that there are less barriers to entry.
Instead of using cross-outs and adding text to the original, I have used the original as a template and removed items, combined items, and made other changes.
So let’s discuss the section ACCEPTANCE OF MAGISTERS…
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SECTION I. ACCEPTANCE OF MAGISTERS
…1.1- Citizens wishing to become Magisters must do all of the following:
…1.1.1- Recite the Magister’s Pledge in the appropriate designated location in the Magisterium sub-forum;
…1.1.2- Be a Citizen of TEP for at least one month prior to application;
…1.1.3- Be a WA Member with their TEP resident nation;
…1.1.4- Supply the name of their resident WA nation, except if their WA nation is involved in EPSA, in which case it may remain classified;
…1.1.5- Complete a Public Official Disclosure Form;
…1.1.6- Have posted at least 10 times in the TEP forum.
…1.2- Citizens wishing to become Magisters must have accomplished at least 3 of the following:
…1.2.1- Endorse the Delegate and all Viziers;
…1.2.2- Comment on, or debate legislation in the Magisterium as a citizen three times;
…1.2.3- Complete a course, practicum, tenure or academic publication in The East Pacific University;
…1.2.4- Contribute to ‘TEP Evolved’ subforum five times;
…1.2.5- Join and contribute to an Executive ministry, service or agency, including the EPSA, evidenced by recognition of contribution by an Executive minister or, in case of EPSA, the General.
…1.3-The Magisterium shall, by majority vote, decide whether the new Candidate-Magister will be accepted.
…1.4- Citizens who are denied acceptance into the Magisterium may appeal the decision and demand a referendum from all citizens of The East Pacific:
…1.4.1- The appellant must present a petition for Regional Referendum on Magister Acceptance to the Conclave, endorsed by at least 5 citizens;
…1.4.2- The petition will be reviewed by the Conclave and if valid, the Conclave will schedule a regional election;
…1.4.3- If elected by a majority vote of the citizens voting in the election, the appellant will be accepted into the Magisterium.
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My revised and simplified SECTION I:
SECTION I. ACCEPTANCE OF MAGISTERS
1.1- Citizens wishing to become Magisters must do all of the following:
1.1.1- Be a Citizen of TEP;
1.1.2- Be a WA Member with their TEP resident nation;
1.1.3- Supply the name of their resident WA nation, except if their WA nation is involved in EPSA, in which case it may remain classified;
1.1.4- Endorse the Delegate and all Viziers;
1.1.5- Complete a Public Official Disclosure Form;
1.1.6- Complete a course, practicum, tenure or academic publication in The East Pacific University;
1.1.7- Post on the RMB at least three times;
1.1.8- Contribute to ‘TEP Evolved’ subforum at least three times;
1.1.9- Join and contribute to an Executive ministry, service or agency, including EPSA, evidenced by recognition of contribution by an Executive Minister or the Delegate;
1.1.10- Recite the Magister’s Pledge in the appropriate designated location in the Magisterium sub-forum;
1.2-The Magisterium shall, by majority vote, decide whether the new Candidate-Magister will be accepted.
1.3- Citizens who are denied acceptance into the Magisterium may appeal the decision to the Conclave;
1.3.1- The appellant must present a petition on Magister Acceptance to the Conclave, listing their qualifications for the Magisterium and their reasons why they feel the Magisterium vote should be declared invalid. The petition must be endorsed by at least 5 citizens;
1.3.2- The contents of the petition will be reviewed by the Conclave and if valid, the Conclave will instruct the Provost to present the contents of the petition to the Magisterium and schedule a new election;
1.3.3- If elected by a majority vote of the Magisterium, the appellant will be accepted into the Magisterium.
1.3.4- There is no appeal of a second Magisterium election.